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A review by ravenousrose
The Heir by Grace Burrowes
3.0
Extra star given for potential. The writer may improve as time goes on and this certainly was better than some of the absolute crap first-time romances I’ve read. However, it still needed some work.
Main, non-spoiling complaints:
- awkward,repetitive language that was inappropriate for the time period
- good character development ruined by unreasonable (even ridiculous) actions taken by characters
- hard to follow sub plots
- odd anti-climactic ‘reveals’
Main, non-spoiling complaints:
- awkward,repetitive language that was inappropriate for the time period
- good character development ruined by unreasonable (even ridiculous) actions taken by characters
- hard to follow sub plots
- odd anti-climactic ‘reveals’