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A review by readwithkiekie
One to Watch by Kate Stayman-London
3.0
I really enjoyed this book, it was fun , dramatic and a quick read. However, I had a few issues with the book both editing and character wise.
This book could easily have been 30-50 pages shorter. There was so much unnecessary filler on here, like why do we need to read a receipt? It adds nothing to the story and just takes away from the world of Bea and Main Squeeze.
I’d also like to know why the author and editors didn’t think to fact check on makeup skills and applications? Bronzer goes on your cheek bones or just above them, not below them. You also wouldn’t highlight your upper lip unless you like that sweaty lip look.
The main issue I had was how Bea made herself out to be the victim when she was a shitty person. She slept with a man who had a fiancé, she was falling in love with Asher, saying he’s her person but then has sex with Luc and expects Asher to be okay with it. Bea is trash.
This book could easily have been 30-50 pages shorter. There was so much unnecessary filler on here, like why do we need to read a receipt? It adds nothing to the story and just takes away from the world of Bea and Main Squeeze.
I’d also like to know why the author and editors didn’t think to fact check on makeup skills and applications? Bronzer goes on your cheek bones or just above them, not below them. You also wouldn’t highlight your upper lip unless you like that sweaty lip look.
The main issue I had was how Bea made herself out to be the victim when she was a shitty person. She slept with a man who had a fiancé, she was falling in love with Asher, saying he’s her person but then has sex with Luc and expects Asher to be okay with it. Bea is trash.