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A review by beth_waller97
Reckless Hands by T.L. Smith
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.0
What in the Wattpad romance????
Look, there’s potential here - a lot of it. I think if the characters were fleshed out a little more, and there was more of an introduction to them than just the door banging open and some guy going ‘you’re getting married’, we could have a really good book here. Maybe even great, with a few adjustments.
It just feels really rushed, nothing is ever really expanded on, there’s no descriptions of anything other than the sex, I want porn with PLOT and DESCRIPTION and SETTING, not just a load of events thrown into 300 pages and then a plot twist at the end that doesn’t even make sense BECAUSE YOU CANT LEGALLY GET MARRIED IF THE OTHER PERSON IS MARRIED AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE SUDDENLY HAS THIS UNMENTIONED CHILD THAT IS NOW A PLOT POINT?????
I’m begging for a rewrite with an expansion because we could have something real fucking strong here, the foundations are there for it. I just want more, and not in the form of reading the sequel.
Look, there’s potential here - a lot of it. I think if the characters were fleshed out a little more, and there was more of an introduction to them than just the door banging open and some guy going ‘you’re getting married’, we could have a really good book here. Maybe even great, with a few adjustments.
I’m begging for a rewrite with an expansion because we could have something real fucking strong here, the foundations are there for it. I just want more, and not in the form of reading the sequel.