A review by isd
Lost Destiny by Michael A. Stackpole

5.0

On the 6th round I'm just commenting that Stackpole was indeed a bit inconsistent in his Clanners. I can get that the Wolves didn't give much of a crap about the way they talked, but the Falcons... no, that sort of speech would not fly in a proper Clan - and the Elementals at Alyina were proper Falcons.

I know, nitpicking about very silly things. That short silliness list could include other things like Prezno being constantly called Przeno, but this sort of stuff might have been unclear between authors.