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Breathe by Abbi Glines
3.0

Before you go judging me for reading this book and actually liking it, let me explain.

I was fully prepared to finish this book being unimpressed and totally dis-liking it. The writing was so stiff and formal. There were no contraction used when there should have been. I’m not too sure if this was to make the main character seem more mature like she’s supposed to be, but if it was it didn’t really help any. Instead the dialog seemed forced and… Not good.

However, I believe it was just after the 100 page mark things started to get a little steamy and after that I was a goner. I found myself looking forward to those steamy moments and it’s because of them that this series is definitely going to become a guilty pleasure for me. Take away this books steamy moments and you have a stiff, forced feeling to the dialog and all the relationships as well as a gushy romance that will make you want to puke.

I definitely plan on picking up the next book when I feel in need of indulging myself.