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The Omega Merger by Roxy Collins
DID NOT FINISH: 53%

I was bored. Didn’t enjoy the story much. 

The first thing is an inside joke I just did not get. Awkward start. 

The MC’s name makes me think of a Disney show Liv and Maddie and that’s not a great start to a smutty book

I feel like it had way too many characters from the jump. Felt cluttered 

I found a couple of the alphas kind of overbearing and predatory, but in an icky way. Especially considering it’s supposed to be business 

I wasn’t really a fan of how the men loving men stuff was almost a fetish for the FMC. It made me DNF the story. 

I’ve read better, I’ve read worse