A review by mommabygrace
When Rivals Fall by J.L. Beck, C. Hallman

3.0

Why give a DPOV description when the book itself is not? I would have liked it more if it was true to the description. The extreme, sudden back and forth was a bit much, and the writing does need polishing -grammar and sentence structure. Overall it wasn’t a bad read, and I will be reading the second to see what happens to Harlow. Book #2 had a DPOV description as well, but I’m doubting the story will, just as the first.