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jessicawells5722 's review for:
Sweeter
by Eve Dangerfield
This might have been the most cringeworthy novella I've ever read. We have starving artist, Marley, who's looking for ways to get money, including finding a sugar daddy. Then we meet Will, the hot techy, rich guy who unknowingly (courtesy of a crappy friend) catfished a bunch of girls who thought he was a sugar daddy, including our Marley. Of course, Marley and Will hit it off instantly and Marley says that she doesn't want to have sex because she wants to bring the love of life back into Will. However, they immediately have sex and that goes out the window. Short story, short - Will and Marley get over their dumb obstacles and stay together.
I didn't like this because any type of deeper plot we were starting, never got finished. I loved that Marley didn't want to immediately have sex because she didn't want to fall into a situation where she was going to fix Will and it was going to fizzle out after that. Then, we get into a SUPER CRINGE daddy/princess roleplay that just made me shrivel up like a freaking raisin. It just wasn't done well. Marley ended up being super unlikable, in my opinion, and I just couldn't get on board with anything that was being said/done. If you want a good laugh, look at my highlights for this novella on Goodreads under Jessica Baron.
My recommendation is don't even waste the 40 minutes it took me to read this. Not worth it. And I think that says a lot.
I didn't like this because any type of deeper plot we were starting, never got finished. I loved that Marley didn't want to immediately have sex because she didn't want to fall into a situation where she was going to fix Will and it was going to fizzle out after that. Then, we get into a SUPER CRINGE daddy/princess roleplay that just made me shrivel up like a freaking raisin. It just wasn't done well. Marley ended up being super unlikable, in my opinion, and I just couldn't get on board with anything that was being said/done. If you want a good laugh, look at my highlights for this novella on Goodreads under Jessica Baron.
My recommendation is don't even waste the 40 minutes it took me to read this. Not worth it. And I think that says a lot.