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Dear Wendy by Ann Zhao
3.0
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Honestly, I expected more out of this book. I got the impression the author wanted to write the book that they would like to read; however, in the journey to be diverse, the story has been lost. I don't believe any of the emotions felt by the characters as we never really saw the stakes. We didn't truly see the relationships developing - we were simply told. I'm a huge preacher or show don't tell, and, unfortunately, there was a lot of telling in this story. Now, that being said, I believe this writer has a lot of room to grow and could create stories that will make people feel things in the future.