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curlykristenk 's review for:
Flawless
by Elsie Silver
lighthearted
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
Book club book-
Favourite line: ‘I guess you can be a doctor and still be stupid’
I love the way she told off rob over the phone, favourite part hands down.
I think Summer was written as a bit of a shallow character. It didn’t mention her ‘passion’ for the gym until at the end of the book. I would’ve loved to have read when she first went to the gym at the start more descriptions about how it was her happy place or just more meaningful than it was. I thought her friendship with Willa was a bit forgotten and only brought up when convenient. Just a bit shallow as a person and a woman, which always sucks.
It had repetitive phrases throughout; ‘rubbed my/her lips together’ could’ve been a very fun drinking game. It was used 4 times in one chapter alone.
The texting was often unnecessary for the plot and broke up the flow of events that were happening/the writing. I get it could’ve helped with the change of perspective but I think it maybe could’ve been done differently.
The random pop culture references that were sometimes used incorrectly; ‘I wish I was like thanos and could snap my fingers and get rid of everyone else in here’ you’d only be getting rid of half, what are we even talking about hahahah
You’re also telling me cowboys from a small town watched, remembered and used a reference from the hunger games unironically? Idk
Also the use of ‘im an empath’ and ‘not today Satan’ unironically killed me.
If I could give it a 2.5 I would, the cowboy thing was fun and their build up was really fun too.
Favourite line: ‘I guess you can be a doctor and still be stupid’
I love the way she told off rob over the phone, favourite part hands down.
I think Summer was written as a bit of a shallow character. It didn’t mention her ‘passion’ for the gym until at the end of the book. I would’ve loved to have read when she first went to the gym at the start more descriptions about how it was her happy place or just more meaningful than it was. I thought her friendship with Willa was a bit forgotten and only brought up when convenient. Just a bit shallow as a person and a woman, which always sucks.
It had repetitive phrases throughout; ‘rubbed my/her lips together’ could’ve been a very fun drinking game. It was used 4 times in one chapter alone.
The texting was often unnecessary for the plot and broke up the flow of events that were happening/the writing. I get it could’ve helped with the change of perspective but I think it maybe could’ve been done differently.
The random pop culture references that were sometimes used incorrectly; ‘I wish I was like thanos and could snap my fingers and get rid of everyone else in here’ you’d only be getting rid of half, what are we even talking about hahahah
You’re also telling me cowboys from a small town watched, remembered and used a reference from the hunger games unironically? Idk
Also the use of ‘im an empath’ and ‘not today Satan’ unironically killed me.
If I could give it a 2.5 I would, the cowboy thing was fun and their build up was really fun too.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Cursing