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A review by zahramclin
Walk the Wild With Me by Rachel Atwood
2.0
this book… was disappointing compared to its premise. the big takeaway is: you need to explain concepts to your readers. just because you’ve studied it for years doesn’t mean anyone else has. it feels like a first draft was polished up on a line-level and then published
SPOILERS AFTER THIS LINE
- the climax is given away by the synopsis
- what was the point of that long description of a girl peeing?
- the author’s view on medieval treatment of women and cleanliness was clearly influenced by the renaissance. (aka it was actually pretty good until the renaissance came along and took several steps back)
- the author is constantly using archaic words And their modern equivalents
- consistency where? (cup vs pitcher)
- lack of transitions (it gets Bad at some point. I have no idea who these people are)
SPOILERS AFTER THIS LINE
- the climax is given away by the synopsis
- what was the point of that long description of a girl peeing?
- the author’s view on medieval treatment of women and cleanliness was clearly influenced by the renaissance. (aka it was actually pretty good until the renaissance came along and took several steps back)
- the author is constantly using archaic words And their modern equivalents
- consistency where? (cup vs pitcher)
- lack of transitions (it gets Bad at some point. I have no idea who these people are)