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A review by aleeqa
Guardian of the Gold Breathers by Elise Stephens
adventurous
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
3.0
What I like about this story:
Dragon! Who doesn't like dragon? Using the term Gold Breather is different, but it lacks appeal. The word 'dragon' is still more appealing to readers.
I like the idea and the moral values that the author wants to deliver in this story. This is a suitable story for children to read. Since the main character is just twelve years old, I'm sure the target readers are around that age.
What I don't like about the story:
The flow of the scenes, even what happening in the scene, is not smooth at all. The writing left me confuse sometime. I can't really make sense of certain things, and I keep find my mind drifting away from the story.
A magical, fantastical story like this should make m immersed in its world, but I can't fully immersed in this story like I was hoping to.
Dragon! Who doesn't like dragon? Using the term Gold Breather is different, but it lacks appeal. The word 'dragon' is still more appealing to readers.
I like the idea and the moral values that the author wants to deliver in this story. This is a suitable story for children to read. Since the main character is just twelve years old, I'm sure the target readers are around that age.
What I don't like about the story:
The flow of the scenes, even what happening in the scene, is not smooth at all. The writing left me confuse sometime. I can't really make sense of certain things, and I keep find my mind drifting away from the story.
A magical, fantastical story like this should make m immersed in its world, but I can't fully immersed in this story like I was hoping to.