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A review by beccamc02
Save Me by M.C. Frank
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
mysterious
sad
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
I went into this expecting more. It came up as being the first story, but this was actually published 3 years after Lose Me, which I think is from Ari's perspective? I don't know.
Spelling mistakes occasionally.
The MMC was annoying. He was wordy, but not in a good way. There was a lot of exposition thrown at me in the first chapter or two. I didn't know the MMC name until page 31.
"I'm going crazy here. Have dinner with me". - mental. He just seemed a bit obsessed over this
Guy saves pretty girl from dying and has a 1/4 life crisis... I don't really understand his motivation. He nearly kills her a second time within like a week of knowing her.
The FMC, Ari, keeps falling or fainting or whatever. Surely she couldn't become a stunt woman if she kept getting ill all the time idk.
I feel like the author is trying to do some extra here, throwing in quotes like "There's so much pain behind your eyes". And " ". The dialogue doesn't really feel fleshed out and realistic. Kinda seems like they had a good general idea and plot points and couldn't then work out how to connect them all well.
Spelling mistakes occasionally.
The MMC was annoying. He was wordy, but not in a good way. There was a lot of exposition thrown at me in the first chapter or two. I didn't know the MMC name until page 31.
"I'm going crazy here. Have dinner with me". - mental. He just seemed a bit obsessed over this
Guy saves pretty girl from dying and has a 1/4 life crisis... I don't really understand his motivation. He nearly kills her a second time within like a week of knowing her.
The FMC, Ari, keeps falling or fainting or whatever. Surely she couldn't become a stunt woman if she kept getting ill all the time idk.
I feel like the author is trying to do some extra here, throwing in quotes like "There's so much pain behind your eyes". And " ". The dialogue doesn't really feel fleshed out and realistic. Kinda seems like they had a good general idea and plot points and couldn't then work out how to connect them all well.