A review by dianehatz_author
A Sword of the Three Rivers by Seth Hobbs

3.0

I would have given A Sword of the Three Rivers three and a half stars if it was possible. Hobbs is a really good storyteller, so I found myself caught up in the story. But too much of it was over-explained, over-written and under-edited for me. The action will get your heart beating and keep you turning pages, but I got bogged down in all the words. I hope Hobbs will hire an editor and copywriter for his next book because he has the potential to be a memorable storyteller. He just has to get out of the way of his tendency to over-explain. Good effort though - and I look forward to more from him.