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1.0

 this book does the one thing i despise amongst all others.

[this section will be in the female main character's pov]

wow a line break great

[this section will be in the male main's pov]
[he kisses her/looks at her/says something to her]
[wow it just jumps to hers again! wow ! wow !!!!!! WOW !!!!!!!!]

line by line this is fine but this is so much one of my pet peeves. i hate it so much. every vein in my body throbs UNsexily with GREAT ANGER. started this today because i bumped off a bunch of my others without finishing, and i think it was the heat from my angry throbbing veins that kept me reading. by the time i got to 30%, i was so cross. if you're going to approach your povs in your book, like....just fucking stick to one in each section and if you're changing then it better because someone fucking died ok.

sadly they did not die :(