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caroline789 's review for:
On the Line
by Naomi Loud
ozzy definitely gives off carmy vibes. it was almost like reading the bear fanfic, but he also has a lot of different baggage and personal drama that sets this apart. a few kinks were explored that typically show up in darker stories, but ozzy wasn’t stomping all over james’ boundaries and actually took a surprise turn as a submissive for her.
a few grammatical errors and the pacing was a bit weird. i feel like nothing was really resolved, but it also made it more realistic that everyone’s problems didn’t magically go away.
i’d say this is safely 4.25-4.5⭐️ mainly because i just liked ozzy, and james also had good character growth.
a few grammatical errors and the pacing was a bit weird. i feel like nothing was really resolved, but it also made it more realistic that everyone’s problems didn’t magically go away.
i’d say this is safely 4.25-4.5⭐️ mainly because i just liked ozzy, and james also had good character growth.