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thinde 's review for:
Defiance of the Fall
by TheFirstDefier
This is a nice LitRPG power-fantasy. The protagonist is likable, if lacking much altruism. This one is set on a modified Earth, brought into the "System," which is a sub-genre I quite like.
My only gripe is the author's tendency to repeat a word. Adverbs and qualifiers come in pairs within a sentence or two, as if the word was stuck in his head struggling to drop onto the page one more time. Weird, and hard to miss once you notice the pattern.
My only gripe is the author's tendency to repeat a word. Adverbs and qualifiers come in pairs within a sentence or two, as if the word was stuck in his head struggling to drop onto the page one more time. Weird, and hard to miss once you notice the pattern.