A review by lucycharm9
Things I Wanted to Say (but never did) by Monica Murphy

dark emotional mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

This book totally satisfies my hidden sub self. Whit is so damn hot when he calls Summer his pretty little whore. I enjoy the read while there are definitely some flaws. Some chapters feels like just word filling and can be cut short or removed without affecting the flow of the story. Also I don’t understand the motive of why Slyvie turned 180 (I got that she was jealous that Summer chose her brother over her but she did not necessarily have to say the same hurtful thing to Whit even after Summer left). Also I was not really convinced of how Sylvia just gave in so easily toward the end while I didn’t see Whit making any persuasive statements despite having his father on his side and he was over eighteen years old at that point. 
Also the bullying in this book is not that bad. I favor Rina Kent’s bullying more (you know what I mean if you’ve read Aiden and Elsa’s book) where the bullying was more brutal.

P.S. the butt play in this book is 10/10! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 where Summer gave Whit a handjob while tonguing his backdoor

Heat: 🔥🔥🔥🔥-🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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