finnishelderberry 's review for:

Commanding Flame and Shield by S.J. Barnett

1.0

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DNF. 70% through. This is had promise till you realize that there is little to no world building, the author likes to use tell instead of show repeatedly. Fated mates troupe in this book is the worst, because they don't freaking talk enough to have any connection on page, the chemistry between them is fabricated between the author telling us they grew close and time passes not showing us anything. I will not be finishing.