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A review by erinbrook
The Bachelorette Party by Carissa Ann Lynch
2.0
As someone who was born and raised in south Louisiana, I knew instantly I needed to read a book about a Nola bachelorette party! Ohhh this as a huge miss for me.
First of all, it was WAY too short to have so many POV's. The characters all had the exact same personality. If we weren't told the differences, we'd have no idea they weren't all the same person.
This is picky but if you base a book down here, it will get judged when things are "off"...
Ma'am. There aren't "many" different kinds of gumbo. We have chicken and sausage gumbo and we have seafood gumbo. That's it. No others.
Also if you're going to use traditional last names, for the love of all things holy, have the narrator learn how to pronounce them. The "c" in LeBlanc IS SILENT.
First of all, it was WAY too short to have so many POV's. The characters all had the exact same personality. If we weren't told the differences, we'd have no idea they weren't all the same person.
This is picky but if you base a book down here, it will get judged when things are "off"...
Ma'am. There aren't "many" different kinds of gumbo. We have chicken and sausage gumbo and we have seafood gumbo. That's it. No others.
Also if you're going to use traditional last names, for the love of all things holy, have the narrator learn how to pronounce them. The "c" in LeBlanc IS SILENT.