A review by avybear_16
The Chase by Elle Kennedy

lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

I love Summer as a character but the author made so many mistakes in this book. For one she sometimes refers to summer as ADHD symptom adjacent, and sometimes as ADHD. Disabilities aren’t dirty words it’s okay to say a character has a disability just do your research on the disability. Which was another thing she didn’t do. Don’t write about disabilities you don’t know about learn then write. I also think a good chunk in the middle it’s just poorly written it. Fitz says and does so many things that don’t feel like they fit his character like he’s a very easygoing person but for a whole bit he’s agressive.
He is also in capable of saying i like you when she’s telling him say it i wont date hunter which just feels so childish and gross
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