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Secrets of the Chocolate House by Paula Brackston
2.0

The concept had potential but approximately halfway through, the book began feeling both repetitive and contradictory. The main character would have a revelation, go on a bit about it, several pages later be back to her original viewpoint, and then suddenly have the same revelation again as if it had never occurred.
Also, not a fan of how the ending has a blindingly obvious cliffhanger indicating another tale to come.
And yet, if I find the time, I will most likely attempt at third book in the hopes of plot resolution and to see if the main character's personality firms up.