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A review by hwar
The Veiled Kingdom by Holly Renee
2.0
I don't usually write reviews so here's my issues in bullet points
-very little to zero world building
-like 90% of the characters are very black and white and have zero depth. Lame motivations.
-zero chemistry between the main characters. They are so hateful towards each other and then they are just horny towards each other. There is zero love.
-they are supposed to be fae but there's nothing fae-like except one girl had wings.
-there's very little descriptions of any of the characters? Ok we have the hair and eye color of the main peeps but no one else. Unless it was so blink and you miss it. Also, I don't know how old any of these characters are?
-the power thing is not explained at all. Okay, everyone has a power but some have additional powers? And it doesn't say what these powers are except for healers and one girl said she had earth powers. What does that mean?? Very vague.
-the writing itself isn't bad? but the story itself is lacking.
It's a quick read and I'm halfway through the second one, but I think for respect to myself I'm not going to finish it.
-very little to zero world building
-like 90% of the characters are very black and white and have zero depth. Lame motivations.
-zero chemistry between the main characters. They are so hateful towards each other and then they are just horny towards each other. There is zero love.
-they are supposed to be fae but there's nothing fae-like except one girl had wings.
-there's very little descriptions of any of the characters? Ok we have the hair and eye color of the main peeps but no one else. Unless it was so blink and you miss it. Also, I don't know how old any of these characters are?
-the power thing is not explained at all. Okay, everyone has a power but some have additional powers? And it doesn't say what these powers are except for healers and one girl said she had earth powers. What does that mean?? Very vague.
-the writing itself isn't bad? but the story itself is lacking.
It's a quick read and I'm halfway through the second one, but I think for respect to myself I'm not going to finish it.