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A review by whyemmawhyyy
By Sin I Rise: Part One by Cora Reilly
2.0
I have only one thing to say about this book; it was CRINGEY AF. So damn cringey. The only reason I didn't rate it a 1/5 is because I genuinely loved Marcella but besides that, this was a nightmare to read.
Maddox can't be 25. I find it impossible to believe that any 25 year old would either think or talk the way he does. He was just like an overgrown baby. I couldn't with him.
Below are excerpts that made me cringe hard:
1. “I won’t release you for a quick fuck, no matter how fuckable you are. But nice try.”
2. “Maddox chuckled as if he could read at least part of my thoughts. “I want to cum all over your perfect body.”
“I’m not sure if I want to get whatever sexual diseases you have.”
“If I had any diseases, you would have gotten them through the pussy-tonguing you just had.”
3. “Fuck, Snow White, let me eat that royal pussy.”
4. “Riding my mouth with your pussy like a fucking rodeo rider was your choice, princess. Your cream on my tongue’s proof of that.”
5. “And more than that, a little voice, one I used to call my instinct, told me that Maddox was the guy I should lose it to.
Maddox chuckled as if he could read at least part of my thoughts. “I want to cum all over your perfect body.”
6. “Even in a tattered and bloody wife beater and my old boxer shorts, Snow White looked more regal than any queen on a throne of gold and diamonds ever could. She carried her invisible crown with unabashed pride. Fuck, this woman had been born to be a queen and she fucking owned that title.”
7. “Mad,” someone called. I didn’t recognize the voice in my lust-hazy brain. He rattled against the door, almost giving me a heart attack but Maddox didn’t release me. His face stayed between my legs.
“Fuck off, I’m eating out pussy,” Maddox shouted before he noisily sucked at my pussy lips.”
8. “Too much?” Maddox murmured, sucking my lower lip into his mouth. “Your pretty pussy just took my entire cock. You can take three fingers. It’ll be worth it, Snow White.”
9. “I still couldn’t believe I’d slept with Snow White, that I had popped her cherry.”
I'm sure there were more cringe moments but oh well! I also didn't like Aria in this book. She was weird. She seemed to detached and like a motivational speaker.
Maddox can't be 25. I find it impossible to believe that any 25 year old would either think or talk the way he does. He was just like an overgrown baby. I couldn't with him.
Below are excerpts that made me cringe hard:
1. “I won’t release you for a quick fuck, no matter how fuckable you are. But nice try.”
2. “Maddox chuckled as if he could read at least part of my thoughts. “I want to cum all over your perfect body.”
“I’m not sure if I want to get whatever sexual diseases you have.”
“If I had any diseases, you would have gotten them through the pussy-tonguing you just had.”
3. “Fuck, Snow White, let me eat that royal pussy.”
4. “Riding my mouth with your pussy like a fucking rodeo rider was your choice, princess. Your cream on my tongue’s proof of that.”
5. “And more than that, a little voice, one I used to call my instinct, told me that Maddox was the guy I should lose it to.
Maddox chuckled as if he could read at least part of my thoughts. “I want to cum all over your perfect body.”
6. “Even in a tattered and bloody wife beater and my old boxer shorts, Snow White looked more regal than any queen on a throne of gold and diamonds ever could. She carried her invisible crown with unabashed pride. Fuck, this woman had been born to be a queen and she fucking owned that title.”
7. “Mad,” someone called. I didn’t recognize the voice in my lust-hazy brain. He rattled against the door, almost giving me a heart attack but Maddox didn’t release me. His face stayed between my legs.
“Fuck off, I’m eating out pussy,” Maddox shouted before he noisily sucked at my pussy lips.”
8. “Too much?” Maddox murmured, sucking my lower lip into his mouth. “Your pretty pussy just took my entire cock. You can take three fingers. It’ll be worth it, Snow White.”
9. “I still couldn’t believe I’d slept with Snow White, that I had popped her cherry.”
I'm sure there were more cringe moments but oh well! I also didn't like Aria in this book. She was weird. She seemed to detached and like a motivational speaker.