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Water Moon by Samantha Sotto Yambao
2.0
adventurous dark emotional hopeful mysterious reflective sad tense slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

this was really underwhelming. 

the world-building had a lot of potential, but was so poorly organized that it just felt like a bunch of pretty locations cobbled together. this is the second time in a few months that I’ve compared a book’s world building to a Coraline-style other mother universe, complete with the eerie white space between the fleshed out parts. 

the characters were sweet, but I didn’t find myself very invested in them, or really understanding their motives without a lot of telling vs showing. The haphazard narrative and constant timeline switches & flashbacks & imagination sequences didn’t help. 

i think this could have been a really pretty limited animated series, but in written form it felt simultaneously too episodic and incoherent  

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