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A review by puppygirl_cryptid
The Eye of Argon by Jim Theis

funny fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? N/A
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

1.5

Do I approve of Theis being mocked and bullied to the point of never writing again? Not really, no. Can I at least understand why that happened anyways? Yeah, for sure.

Terrible writing, uninteresting characters, so many misspellings and typos, and for some reason, the writer seems to be lacking object permanence or may have alternatively had made a vow never to proof read any bit of his story, as he forgets what hand certain objects are held in or what characters have already died which makes reading and making sense of the everything quite the challenge.

Also, an author who writes “she queried breastily?” should probably just quit right then and there anyways.

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