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A review by bitchie
Afraid to Fly by L.A. Witt
3.0
I don't know what it was here, but something was off. I thought there was a lot of repetition, a lot of characters repeating themselves, or characters dwelling on the same exact things over and over again. A lot of variations on "no wonder they get along so well", and a lot of "how do I tell my ex I'm with a man now." And for Riptide to have touted themselves as a publisher who put editing at the top of the list, both books in this series had several little editing issues- wrong words or misspellings. I expect better for the price.
It was nice though, to read a book where the focus isn't all about the buttsex. Especially coming from LA Witt, there weren't a lot of sex scenes, probably because with Travis' limitations, there's only so many ways you can write a blow job or a hand job. I only kind of missed it, lol!
I was also glad to see that there wasn't a big work issue that caused their relationship to be forbidden. Their only obstacles were themselves, and other than one stupid freakout near the end, they weren't too bad.
It was nice though, to read a book where the focus isn't all about the buttsex. Especially coming from LA Witt, there weren't a lot of sex scenes, probably because with Travis' limitations, there's only so many ways you can write a blow job or a hand job. I only kind of missed it, lol!
I was also glad to see that there wasn't a big work issue that caused their relationship to be forbidden. Their only obstacles were themselves, and other than one stupid freakout near the end, they weren't too bad.