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A review by jackiemcee
Heartless Hero by Mary Catherine Gebhard
1.0
DNF AT 58%. I HAVE A LOT OF ISSUES WITH THIS BOOK, MAINLY WITH THE WRITING.
For the first few pages, everything went so smoothly. However as I got into it the writing became so much as a jumbled mess. The delivery of lines just fell off. The author was trying to build up a heartbreaking scene but it fell flat then on to the next scene like the previous emotions she was trying to depict were nowhere to be read.
Even the stolen sexual scenes were described vaguely like the hero and heroine were in front of heroine's family stealing touches but nobody can see them, I mean how does that even work? Was there an invisible bubble around them then? Jesus it was an utter mess of story telling.
Theo and Abigail. So their love-hate relationship was because of miscommunication that ended them being 5 years apart and then surprise surprise they talked about it about 45% of the book for barely 5 minutes then the next thing you know they were going at each other in the next chapter. Again, poor story-telling and writing. Gosh, I'm done.
For the first few pages, everything went so smoothly. However as I got into it the writing became so much as a jumbled mess. The delivery of lines just fell off. The author was trying to build up a heartbreaking scene but it fell flat then on to the next scene like the previous emotions she was trying to depict were nowhere to be read.
Even the stolen sexual scenes were described vaguely like the hero and heroine were in front of heroine's family stealing touches but nobody can see them, I mean how does that even work? Was there an invisible bubble around them then? Jesus it was an utter mess of story telling.
Theo and Abigail. So their love-hate relationship was because of miscommunication that ended them being 5 years apart and then surprise surprise they talked about it about 45% of the book for barely 5 minutes then the next thing you know they were going at each other in the next chapter. Again, poor story-telling and writing. Gosh, I'm done.