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pinakamataas 's review for:
Playboy Pilot
by Penelope Ward, Vi Keeland
As per usual both authors deliver an easy and enjoyable read.
This time, though I took up issue with continuity errors. Sometimes I don't have issued with a few of those, but this time there was one glaring and one that was a bit more subtle.
They both have birthday on fourth of July, and in their meeting Kendall mentions that she is about to turn 25 (basically the whole plot of the book is based on this little titbit). And then at the end of the book they are having their two-year anniversary of meeting each other for the first time... On July 28th. Like wtf?
The other one is neither here nor there with Carter meeting Anabelle and her mentioning that she doesn't know if she'll lose the estate because she hasn't met her daughter, as it has been 11 months since Kendall and Carter last met, and then seemingly out of the blue Kendall says to Carter that the inheritance has been given to charity, even though we see that timeline is still 'a bit more than 11 months' since meeting for the first time, which (even though the first error says that fourth of July does come soon after July 28th) means she still would be 25 at that time.
And although the collaborations between the two authors I usually like better than their separate work, considering how much I am bothered by errors such as these, I cannot give anything better than 3/5.
This time, though I took up issue with continuity errors. Sometimes I don't have issued with a few of those, but this time there was one glaring and one that was a bit more subtle.
They both have birthday on fourth of July, and in their meeting Kendall mentions that she is about to turn 25 (basically the whole plot of the book is based on this little titbit). And then at the end of the book they are having their two-year anniversary of meeting each other for the first time... On July 28th. Like wtf?
The other one is neither here nor there with Carter meeting Anabelle and her mentioning that she doesn't know if she'll lose the estate because she hasn't met her daughter, as it has been 11 months since Kendall and Carter last met, and then seemingly out of the blue Kendall says to Carter that the inheritance has been given to charity, even though we see that timeline is still 'a bit more than 11 months' since meeting for the first time, which (even though the first error says that fourth of July does come soon after July 28th) means she still would be 25 at that time.
And although the collaborations between the two authors I usually like better than their separate work, considering how much I am bothered by errors such as these, I cannot give anything better than 3/5.