rainelle_barrett 's review for:

See Them Die by Michael Fowler, Michael Fowler

3.0

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I read the book and what i saw from the book was a lot of narrative explanations with minimum dialogue among the characters. I looked for the entertainment and the excitement of the story, but I didn’t feel it. I would like to have read how the killer tracked their pray, what was the reasoning for the killer to seek out his pray. Perhaps hearing from the killers own words. Also, give details of the crime scene. I want to visualize all this as I’m reading. I want feel like I’m there watching this happening around me. Keep the wording simple and to the point of the story. Do not add meaningless narration in there that drags the story out.