rshearon 's review for:

All The Feels by Olivia Dade

3.0

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this one was not quite as good as Spoiler Alert. i love the plus size representation in romance and i LOVE the dual pov, but… how am i supposed to feel the chemistry when the love interest is almost constantly thinking about her appearance…?? from the first meeting, he continually thinks about how “bird-like” and “round” she is. and while he claims to love that, his thinking and wording did not translate that. i love love love the premise and the fan fiction plot line, but can the woman just be fat AND beautiful instead of being beautiful despite being fat please?? i still had a lot of fun, but there was plenty of room for improvement imo!!