A review by zealous_bibliophile
One Small Thing by Erin Watt

4.0

I felt like the story was a little rush and incomplete. There wasn't a sense of justice, yes I know justice doesn't always happen in the real-world, but it should in this sort of book. The violent climax, which you saw coming a mile away, was pretty short and anti climatic. Also the time frame was suddenly forgotten ie 1 hour until x, 10 minutes are noted to have passed, scene that could not have been more than 15 minutes, x occurs. X shouldn't be there and is completely outside the realm of the character's reality that x is. Similarly the scene after x occurs is just too much of a script flip. Then you literally just get a and they lived happily ever after. Like, um, no. There should have been a lot of fall out addressed, also you know the justice that didn't happen, and then actually give us somehow the happy. It's really like a 3.5 or a 3 the more I think about it. I was excited for this but now I'm just disappointed.