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A review by carrix2
Once Two Sisters by Sarah Warburton
2.0
I don't remember why I added this book to my tbr. But I kind of wish I hadn't.
For a while, I couldn't tell if it was bad writing or just a bad audiobook narrator. Turns out it was both. One of the narrators is very breathy and overdramatic. But also the writing is not good. The dialogue is so awkward and unnatural. Who finds a "freelance driver"?? Especially when "Uber" is specifically mentioned later in the book.
There's also a great deal of tell in the book, instead of show.
The characters were flat, the epilogue was just exposition to explain everything. It was painful.
For a while, I couldn't tell if it was bad writing or just a bad audiobook narrator. Turns out it was both. One of the narrators is very breathy and overdramatic. But also the writing is not good. The dialogue is so awkward and unnatural. Who finds a "freelance driver"?? Especially when "Uber" is specifically mentioned later in the book.
There's also a great deal of tell in the book, instead of show.
The characters were flat, the epilogue was just exposition to explain everything. It was painful.