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A review by kimberlyb
Tact: A Pride and Prejudice Variation by Margaret Devere, Jeannie Peneaux
3.0
Mind reading Narrator.
Too much narration. Not enough dialog and interaction between The characters. The narrator knew too much about everyone and gave the motives for everyone's actions. It made the main character unclear. This could have been a lot shorter. Had a lot of explaining and not enough personal connection. This read more like a first draft. And less like a finished story.
Too much narration. Not enough dialog and interaction between The characters. The narrator knew too much about everyone and gave the motives for everyone's actions. It made the main character unclear. This could have been a lot shorter. Had a lot of explaining and not enough personal connection. This read more like a first draft. And less like a finished story.