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Amelia the Level Zero Hero
by V.A. Lewis
Poorly developed antagonists and protagonists, repetitive story gimmicks, lack of world building or context, no suspense or consequence, surface level introspection that feels like it goes nowhere (why did I become an adventurer), things just happen for reasons that aren't explored or explained (some people don't die because of the void for reasons? Noele can suddenly fight beyond her power level when needed because why not. Honestly what is the plot line for the antagonists? Why do they do what they do? Who knows). The occasional entertaining situation and concept potential sadly does not save this work.
This story is the embodiment of people being saved last second and *pikachu face* wow the protagonist is more powerful than they expect ad nauseam, your time is likely better spent elsewhere.
This story is the embodiment of people being saved last second and *pikachu face* wow the protagonist is more powerful than they expect ad nauseam, your time is likely better spent elsewhere.