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A review by romancejunkie
Her Titans by Genevieve Jasper
mysterious
medium-paced
2.0
I really liked this at the beginning. I enjoyed Lai and her attitude and I liked Atlas. But the other guys were all…the exact same. There were no differentiating personality traits, so much so that I couldn’t keep track of whose chapter I was reading because it was one long monotone. It was also super confusing. We get introduced to who is, apparently, the stalker with no mention of who he is at all. Just, “Bob’s always thought they belong together.” That’s all fine and great but who the fuck is Bob?
Sex scenes were very much lacking. No true group stuff. Some two on one action, and one very brief foursome in the epilogue. Boo.
And this needed an editor. Badly. Incorrect words, missing punctuation (like…periods or apostrophes for contractions.) ?! after most questions. Thank god I had this voice read so I didn’t have to look at it otherwise I would’ve flounced early.
Also, the bonus chapter? Fuck you. Idk what the hell that was supposed to be, but fuck you. Knocked this down a star just for that.
Sex scenes were very much lacking. No true group stuff. Some two on one action, and one very brief foursome in the epilogue. Boo.
And this needed an editor. Badly. Incorrect words, missing punctuation (like…periods or apostrophes for contractions.) ?! after most questions. Thank god I had this voice read so I didn’t have to look at it otherwise I would’ve flounced early.
Also, the bonus chapter? Fuck you. Idk what the hell that was supposed to be, but fuck you. Knocked this down a star just for that.