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frogfixture 's review for:

Hum by Helen Phillips
DID NOT FINISH: 28%

This seems like it  has great promise as a story, on  the one hand. On the other hand, it was slow in a way that didn’t feel reflective, just unnecessary detail. Possibly I’m missing the value of those details though, so I might give it another try at some point.