A review by kimster82
Broken Legacy by Jaymin Eve, Tate James

2.0

I am glad I got this over with to be honest. It’s not that I hated Riley but the 8000 times the word “butterfly” is mentioned got old already in book one and I really didn’t need to be reminded every other page how special she is. Because everybody was trying to get into her pants and kept telling her how amazing/hot/strong she is.

What I disliked the most is the whole Chosen One vibe she gave off. Only Buffy gets away with that title in my book. She’s a nobody and suddenly she has 4 gorgeous guys all fawning over her, protecting her and letting her in their circle, treating her like family in barely a few months time? You know, the all the girls want to be her and all the boys want to be with her type of chick. Puh-lease.

Also, the girl can’t stop getting kidnapped all the time, and as if she wasn’t special enough up until this point:
Spoilersuddenly a stalker/serial killer is involved and of course he targets Riley! I’m sure she farts glitter and everyhing.
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And then Beck... I think he patended the words “I’m not letting you out of my sight Riley”. He also shits money so he could probably really buy said patent.