paper_mache_reader 's review for:

Under Fortunate Stars by Ren Hutchings

DID NOT FINISH: 0%

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There were too many povs for asynchronous storytelling to work, for me. I would have cared more about the characters and the narrative if I felt we weren't losing so much time (especially as half of our cast is meant to be from the past so our story is already asynchronous). Seemed like a great first attempt at science fiction