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The Veiled Kingdom by Holly Renee
2.0

The characters were so flat. This is not romance, this is lust. They just need to fuck. 


How a book ends tells me how the authors wants the readers to feel about their book. The ending made me feel icky. 

Also, I feel like she didn't have enough content for this book so she added pictures and blank pages between chapters. 

Spoiler: 
If a man EVER fucks a woman then says "btw my papa wants to kill you so go away. But thanks for your V card" that woman has every right to use the weapon he taught her to yield and stab his balls.