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A review by veridiann
One for My Enemy by Olivie Blake

3.0

I'm always a sucker for a Romeo and Juliet retelling, especially if it has a fantasy element. I've loved Olivie Blake's other books and was very excited for this one.

The first quarter of the book had me HOOKED. I was so invested in the relationships between the characters and their fates and could not put it down. Sasha and Lev felt authentic and I loved their development and I was particularly excited when the chapters moved back to their narratives.

After the first quarter, the book started to get a bit convoluted. The witch element did not feel well fleshed out; the drug dealing seemed like a small side story when it was originally set out as something much more crucial; the miscommunication between who was dead or alive or which side they were on got very murky and dissolved a lot of the tension that the first part of the novel had crafted so well. Sometimes I felt like the dialogue was so poetically written that it verged on irrelevant to the actual book and I found myself skimming repetitive paragraphs about how beautiful and cruel Marya was and how she was the most powerful person in the world.

Overall, it was a new twist on Romeo and Juliet and with the plot and prose a bit tightened up, I could have reread this over and over again. (Side note to for the eARCs - the layout of this on a Kindle was horrendous to read! It is definitely more suited for a physical copy).

Thank you to Netgalley and the publishers for sending me an eARC in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.