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What drove me away were the data dumps. It felt like minute details were unnecessarily included and that important details were explored all at once. They weren't presented in a way which felt natural from the protagonist's perspective and kept stalling out the narrative. I personally didn't find the protagonist compelling either.
Bright sides: the prose fits YA fantasy and reads easy. The general premise is also interesting. Ended up not finishing.
Bright sides: the prose fits YA fantasy and reads easy. The general premise is also interesting. Ended up not finishing.