amxxee 's review for:

City of Souls and Sinners by Kayla Edwards

DID NOT FINISH: 26%

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This book needs an editor. The story is great, cool world building, strong characters but I DNF because of the writing. It’s just unreadable in parts, long weird descriptions but then you get these passages of dialogue which are fantastic! I’m DNF’ing because I can’t continue for 1000 pages to find out what happens…