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A review by eb00kie
Clockwork Tangerine by Rhys Ford
3.0
One encounters here the trademarks of [a:Rhys Ford|4968409|Rhys Ford|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/authors/1308678470p2/4968409.jpg]'s work so far:
Average characters - not bad
Average plot - needs be more succinct here, more complex in general
Slow pace - it is a novella, storytelling time has a limit
Weak conflict - conflict usually leads to at least one character getting angry
Altogether, a good effort into Steampunk, but that's just a different wrapping of the same old. Has the writing reached a plateau?
Average characters - not bad
Average plot - needs be more succinct here, more complex in general
Slow pace - it is a novella, storytelling time has a limit
Weak conflict - conflict usually leads to at least one character getting angry
Altogether, a good effort into Steampunk, but that's just a different wrapping of the same old. Has the writing reached a plateau?