A review by sierrajbwilliams
Heartless Sky by Susanne Valenti, Caroline Peckham

adventurous challenging dark emotional sad slow-paced

2.5

Some spoilers ahead- 

Many grammatical errors, too many POVs, and too much filler. The first half of the book could have easily been condensed. I’m also upset we couldn’t see more of Tory and Darcy’s training and learning more about themselves at Phoenixes. All we are reading while they’re training other characters POV in the Burrow and that’s it. Then we jump back to Tory and Darcy 4 months later and they have completed their training… seriously? 

I’m also at the point where I feel Tory and Darcy deserve some sort of break. We have one good thing happen for them and then many bad things that follow and end up almost negating any of the good they have experienced. I feel at some point something has to let up, but apparently the time for that is not now. 

I did finish it because I am invested now with the characters, and yes there was a lot of action at the end which I felt was good, but overall I was disappointed in the book.
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