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sdavis12 's review for:
Long Live the Elf Queen
by J.M. Kearl
I really don’t know how this has such good ratings on here. Terrible compared to the first book.
The characters were flat. Layala went from a strong FMC with a personality to a love sick puppy with no sense.
Soooo many cheesy filler conversations. Every 7 pages is a whole page about tif eating berries and saying stupid things. The author keeps repeating the same lines about tif being afraid, she likes snacks and annoys thane like ok we get it.
In the first book layala was devastated about killing her lover and in the second book she says he wasn’t that hot and was a terrible lover and then they laughed about it which made no sense.
Random action scenes without a purpose. The sirens and a raven dying then thane is suddenly fine and rolling around with layala and is like oh my bad they must be taking longer than 29 minutes to get over this?? And why didn’t they ask a single question about the lake they were just like haha ok let’s go!
Couldn’t connect with any character. The author does a lot of telling vs showing. All just fell very flat which is sad because the first book was so good.
The characters were flat. Layala went from a strong FMC with a personality to a love sick puppy with no sense.
Soooo many cheesy filler conversations. Every 7 pages is a whole page about tif eating berries and saying stupid things. The author keeps repeating the same lines about tif being afraid, she likes snacks and annoys thane like ok we get it.
In the first book layala was devastated about killing her lover and in the second book she says he wasn’t that hot and was a terrible lover and then they laughed about it which made no sense.
Random action scenes without a purpose. The sirens and a raven dying then thane is suddenly fine and rolling around with layala and is like oh my bad they must be taking longer than 29 minutes to get over this?? And why didn’t they ask a single question about the lake they were just like haha ok let’s go!
Couldn’t connect with any character. The author does a lot of telling vs showing. All just fell very flat which is sad because the first book was so good.