A review by ollie_again
Precious by Roe Horvat

fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

0.5

A plot? Nowhere to be found. And that would be fine and all, if there weren't problems introduced and either squeezed and resolved between one sex scene and another, or never truly resolved
(Micah's relationship with his father? Absolutely nothing.)
And reading this as a PWP might be okay, some scenes were hot, but that dirty talk was rusty, forced and repetitive as hell. Cringing every time, Travis started with it. Example you can open at your discretion:
"my cum-hungry little monster"
might take the cake for the worst piece of dirty talk I've ever read.
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