A review by cmaestephens
The Sons of Thestian by M.E. Vaughan

2.0

I have a lot to say about the 100 pages of this book I read, but overall the book was just way too unpolished for me to tolerate reading it. This book is riddled with spelling & grammatical errors that made me cringe on EVERY SINGLE page. The bones of a great story are there, but the author really needs to revisit the writing & clean it up. I understand that independent authors don't have access to fancy book editors, but there has to be SOMEONE out there who could help bring this book up to snuff.

If this book is ever republished, I will absolutely, 100% give it another chance. I definitely saw something in this story, I just couldn't look past the writing. Or the character names, which are obnoxious. I really wanted to love it, which is the only reason I even pressed myself to get to page 100 before giving up.