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A review by vrstal
Bold Beginning by T.H. Compton
2.0
So I always have a hard time rating short pieces just because there’s not enough time to make things breathe in a way you’d expect a novel to do - so I have to keep it in mind.
This was a cute age gap, opposites-attract sort of vibe, with shy older man Samuel and bad boy younger top Devon. The meet cute in the cafe was cute, and we get a sense of their personalities of Sam having a shy and skittish personality and Devon being more confident and outgoing.
It’s hard to really say what I feel about this story besides “aw it was cute”, honestly. I’m excited to read Beautifully Built though, because it will be longer. There was some editing issues like unfinished sentences which were a bit jarring. The sex scene was a little lack luster for me.
Overall, just okay!
This was a cute age gap, opposites-attract sort of vibe, with shy older man Samuel and bad boy younger top Devon. The meet cute in the cafe was cute, and we get a sense of their personalities of Sam having a shy and skittish personality and Devon being more confident and outgoing.
It’s hard to really say what I feel about this story besides “aw it was cute”, honestly. I’m excited to read Beautifully Built though, because it will be longer. There was some editing issues like unfinished sentences which were a bit jarring. The sex scene was a little lack luster for me.
Overall, just okay!