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Sleet Kitten by S.J. Tilly
3.0

I’m struggling to rate this one, because I did like the story but felt like the writing could be tightened up. The H called the h “kitten” but then used it outside of just a pet name, and used it instead of her actual name for everything, like “Kitten was wearing…” etc. and I found that to be on the cringy side. The story itself was very cute and I enjoyed the H being possessive while also being sweet! I’ll rate it 3.5 stars and round down.